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Why Horror? September 24, 2008

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This article was written for a couple of reasons. 

 

1.                  To explain/defend my interest in horror

 

2.                  To introduce my new WordPress blog, “LightnessandDark”

 

What is horror?

 

The first point to make about horror is it is not a genre.  It is a feeling and an element of fiction that can be present in any genre, like humor.  I happen to be a big fan of both, so books like Odd Thomas by Dean Koontz are right up my alley.  Works of fiction should be entertaining above all else, and horror and humor are two great ways to entertain me.

 

It is extremely difficult to determine what is and what is not a horror story.  A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens is a ghost story, but is it a horror story?  Godzilla is a monster movie, but is it horror?  Alien was scary, but was it horror or science fiction?  Teen Wolf was…oh, you get the point.

 

So why do I find horror entertaining? 

 

I am entertained by horror because it pulls back the thin veil of reality we live in and shows us what lurks in the shadows.  We live in a very enlightened and civilized society.  We don’t believe in fire-breathing dragons, the Loch Ness Monster, or Bigfoot.  We believe Elvis really died on August 16, 1977 (also the date of my earliest memory).  We dismiss things as impossible just because we’ve never seen them.  I believe there are a lot of truths out there we no longer believe in.  Horror fiction explores many of the old truths our civilized society has forgotten.

 

What type of horror do you like?

 

I tend to like supernatural fiction – ghosts, vampires, and maybe a werewolf or two.  My favorite stories are about things that go bump in the night.  I am not as big a fan of slasher films or stories.  About the only exceptions are the Scream movies, which were about horror films as much as anything else – and as spoofs of the “genre”, they were among the smartest horror films out there.  Plus they had Neve Campbell.

 

Serial killers don’t interest me.  I am not a big Michael Myers, Freddy Krueger or Jason Voorhees fan. I have seen too many of those films, and that type of horror has a limited appeal for me.  I can enjoy the tension as the hero/heroine battles against the monster, but any film where we end up rooting for the monster isn’t my thing.  (Aside from Godzilla, I’m always rooting for Godzilla.  As a result, I hated Godzilla vs. King Kong.  Stupid monkey.  We all know who really would have won.)

 

I enjoy spooky horror movies like the “The Sixth Sense” and “The Others.”  I loved the X-Files and enjoyed the premiere of Fringe.  I like not having all the answers until it’s too late.

 

I avoid almost any horror sequel because they are almost always just cash grabs.  Do we really need a Friday the 13th number 10?  I don’t think so.  The Ring Two, probably not.  Scream 2 and 3 – okay Neve Campbell, so yes.

 

The horror books I like are character driven, set in the “real’ world, heh, heh, heh.  The technical term would probably be mundane horror – an oxymoron.  Stephen King’s Bag of Bones, The Shining, and ‘salem’s Lot are among my favorites, along with The Haunting of Hill House by Shirley Jackson and Ghost Story by Peter Straub.  Here’s my Horror Top Ten list for those who are interested (http://lightnessanddark.wordpress.com/2008/10/09/top-ten-horror-novels/).

 

But why do we need any kind of horror when the world is filled with real horrors?

 

Horror, like most entertainment, is about escapism, taking us away from our problems.  Horror takes us into Dracula’s Castle with Jonathan Harker.  Horror takes us aboard the Nostromo with Ellen Ripley as she battles the Alien.  Horror brings us face to face with someone else’s larger than life problems — allowing us to forget our own problems for a while.  If you think you’ve got problems, at least you aren’t about to be devoured by Dracula or the Alien or something worse.

 

Horror is about setting aside our modern day arrogance about what we know – think we know.  Almost every horror movie has a scene where someone explains why what is happening CANNOT be happening.  I love that moment. 

 

 

What is Lightnessanddark about?

 

Lightnessanddark is a place for those who have the light of Christ, but are entertained by horror and dark fantasy.  It’s a place for fans of Ted Dekker and Frank Peretti, and also a place where we can discuss Stephen King without having to explain his appeal.  (I think most Christians who have a problem with Stephen King have never actually read his work.)  Lightnessanddark will also be a place where I will occasionally share some of my own original fiction.

 

So why do you connect Christianity and horror?

 

People have asked me how a Bible-believing Christian can be so interested in horror, but if you allow for the broadest definition, the Bible is the biggest horror novel of them all.  It includes demons, ghosts, monsters, dragons, plagues, murder, bloodshed and war, but it is also a book of Hope where good overcomes evil in the end. 

 

The Bible is why I am able to enjoy horror fiction.  Through its teachings, I have placed my hope for eternal salvation in the death and resurrection of Jesus Christ.  I can enjoy horror novels, because at the end of the biggest horror novel, I know that through God’s Grace, I will be on the winning side.  That gives me great freedom from any real horror that life can dish out.

 

If we study the Bible carefully, we see things that don’t always fit our perceptions of reality.  We think there are no such things as ghosts, but Saul, with the help of the witch at Endor, conjured up the ghost of Samuel (1 Samuel 28), who then accurately predicted his doom — a horror story for King Saul.

 

We also think there are no such things as fire breathing dragons, but Job 40:19-21 says of Leviathan, “Out of his mouth go burning lamps, and sparks of fire leap out.  Out of his nostrils goeth smoke, as out of a seething pot or caldron.  His breath kindleth coals, and a flame goeth out of his mouth.”  This is one fearsome creature, doesn’t sound like a whale or crocodile to me, sounds horrifying, so I’m intrigued by it.

 

Lightnessanddark is about both sides of the coin, and my hope is that it will make people think about the world around them, maybe even encourage them to peek behind that thin veil we call reality.  You never know what you’ll find…

 

Emily October 31, 2011

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“Emily”

By W.P. Evans

            Kenny approached the house slowly, taking slow, deep breaths.  He looked down at the iPod and its timer, which reflected his goal: sixty minutes in the Wenzlick house for an iPod.  He could do it.

It was just stories, a bunch of kids talking.  There was nothing in the house, no danger.  Hang out for an hour and wait for the timer to hit all zeros, and he’d get to keep his skateboard, plus Derrick’s iPod would be his.

“I’m going to keep the time.”  Derrick said, as he snuck across the back yard with Kenny following.  The yard was a mess with grass up to their knees, part of the charm of the Wenzlick house, but it did give them cover if any cars drove by.  The house was on a corner lot, so it was hard to stay completely out of view from the road.  They worked their way to a pine tree near the back door and hid in its shadow.

They would be visible to the house next door, but there was no chance Mrs. Freeze would see them.  She kept the blinds closed on every window that faced east toward the Wenzlick house.  She’d lived there long enough she knew the Wenzlicks, but no one ever could get her to talk about them.

“That’s fine, but I’m keeping time too.”  Kenny looked up at the moon, and his heart sunk as an oily, black cloud smothered it from view.  He felt the temperature drop, and something in the back of his mind whispered it was not a good night for this.  It wasn’t a dark and stormy night, just dark (too dark for Kenny’s liking), and the air around the house seemed wrong somehow.  This was a mistake.

Derrick put his hand on his shoulder, and Kenny nearly launched himself into the nearest tree.

“Easy!”  Derrick grinned.  “Didjya think I was one of the Wenzlicks, back from the grave?”

“No.”

For a second, that was exactly what Kenny thought, but he wasn’t going to admit it.  Derrick always seemed to come out on top; it wasn’t fair.  Kenny called it the Derrick Luck: things always seemed to work out for Derrick, but this time Kenny was going to come out on top.  Sure, he wanted the iPod, his MP3 player was a piece of junk compared to Derrick’s, but he really just wanted to win the bet, to beat Derrick.

He hit the call button on the iPod as they slipped through the Wenzlick’s sideyard, and Derrick’s new Smart phone started to oink like a pig.  That always made Kenny laugh, but not tonight.

“Hey, Dork.  You’re live…FOR NOW?”  Derrick said in his best monster voice.  There was a high pitched shriek – Kenny thought banshee, but when Derrick reached his phone away from the iPod, the sound stopped.

“Easy, just a little feedback from the speakers.”  Derrick was clearly enjoying this, and Kenny wanted to punch him.  He was already regretting the bet, and he hadn’t even gone into the house.

“Stop or I’m shutting it off.”  Kenny was hoping they’d be too far a way to pick up any signal, but he didn’t have the Derrick Luck.  The iPod had four bars – from a careless neighbor’s signal, and they didn’t even have a password.  The Kenny Luck strikes again.  Now Derrick would get to watch him safely from outside while Kenny faced his fears in the old house.

“You can’t shut it off; that was the deal.  You have to take me for a virtual tour all around the house.  Show me the whole thing, upstairs, basement, everything.”

“I’m not doing it if you’re going to be an idiot about it.”

“Good, then I get your skateboard.  A deal’s a deal.”

“Shut up.  I’m keeping my skateboard.  I’m going to do it.”

“All right.  You’re a little up tight.  Relax.  I can see you’re scared.”

“I am not.”

“Yes, you are.  You’re totally on edge.  Tell you what, I’ll call the whole thing off if you run around the block naked, but you have to run past Kacy’s house.”

“Gee, thanks.  You’re a real pal.”

“I know.  You’re lucky I’m your best friend.”

“Whatever.  Can we just get this over with?  I can’t wait to talk to Kacy with your iPod later tonight.”

“What do you mean?  She’ll be at my house, learning to ride my new skateboard.”

Kenny couldn’t let Derrick win.  He needed a comeback, something to knock Derrick down a couple notches.  “No, she won’t.  She’ll be…Shut up, you Jerk.”

“Wow, Dude.  You really went for the jugular there.  Take it easy!  I was just messing around.”  Derrick 812, Kenny zippo.

Kenny’s stomach began to churn the closer they crept to the house.  He tried to hide it, but he was pretty sure he was turning green.  Nobody messed with the Wenzlick house.  It sat ignored in the middle of the neighborhood since their parents were kids.  People just acted like it wasn’t there.  Kids learned early on, you stayed as far away from that place as possible.

The house was never boarded up, but the windows were all still intact.  No one had the courage to throw rocks at the place.  It was weird.  It was like people thought breaking a window might let something out.

The house looked like a typical Cape Cod, but there was a vibe about the place that said, “Stay away.”  It didn’t look wrong, but it was.  The closer he came to the house, the more Kenny felt it.  He could almost hear it whispered in the cold, night air.

The house had aluminum siding that had probably been close to white at one time, but was now a dirty mix of brown and grey.  The roof was black, and some of the shingles had begun to crumble under the harsh Michigan winters.  The place looked like it was past the point of being a fixer-upper, yet it remained untouched by vandals, vagabonds and even vampires.

Kenny started taking slow, deep breaths again; he was sure he was going to hurl.  He felt like the house knew he was coming and was trying to repel him.  The thought was crazy, but Kenny couldn’t shake it.  It wasn’t doing the same thing to Derrick, only him.  How did it know?

“Make sure you keep the flashlight pointed in the same direction as the camera or I won’t be able to see what’s going on in there.”

“Ok, I got it.  I think you need to relax.”

“Oh, I’m cool.  I’m not the one going in there.”  He tilted his head at the house.  “Just remember, anything less than an hour…”

“I know.  Anything less than an hour, and you get to keep the iPod.”

“And your skateboard.”

“Whatever.”

“See you on the other side.”  Derrick’s monster voice was getting old.

“Shut up, Derrick.”

“Love you too, Kenneth.”

Kenny pushed his way across the yard, through the grass, and stepped up to the back door.  He knew it would open, but as he reached for the handle, he wished more than anything for it to be locked.  Not because he wouldn’t have to go inside, but because he’d have a few more minutes before they found another way in.

He thought about calling it off.  Derrick could have the skateboard, it really didn’t matter.  Kenny could get another one, but then…then Derrick would win…again.  Kenny couldn’t let that happen.  Derrick couldn’t win every time.  It was time for Kenny to step up.

He turned the handle, and the door swung all the way open, like someone pulled it open from the other side.  It banged against the wall, and Kenny waited for the sound of breaking glass.  Nothing.

The door opened to reveal a short, wide room probably eight feet by twenty.

Run!  The thought entered Kenny’s mind.  All he had to do was turn around and run away.  He stood in front of the open door for a moment, readjusting the camera and the flashlight.  Not this time, Derrick.

Kenny slid the toes of his shoes across the threshold and reached his hands into the room, holding out the flashlight to ward off whatever might be waiting for him inside.

“Can you see ok?”  There were toys all over the floor, must have been a kids’ room.  Kenny expected to see them broken, but aside from being a little dusty, they were all intact.

“Yeah, I can see.  GI Joes?”

“Yeah, the old kind, and there’s like a hundred of them.”  Kenny reached down to pick one up, but when his hand was about to touch the closest one, the door shut behind him.  His bladder almost let go right on the floor, then his head started spinning, and he fell to one knee, dropping the light.

It stayed on.  Luckily.  Kenny wasn’t sure what he would have done if he’d been plunged into darkness, but he was pretty sure he would not have come off as cool.

“You ok?”  It was Derrick, talking through the phone.

“Yeah, I’m ok.”

“Did you start your timer?”

Kenny looked down at the iPod, the room still spinning.  “No, I forgot.  I’m starting it now.”

“Mine shows 59 minutes and 30 seconds.”

“Ok, thanks.”  The spinning of the room started to subside.  He shook his head to help clear it.

“Hold up the camera so I can see.  Are you in a bedroom?”

“I don’t think so.  There’s no bed, and I don’t see a dresser either.  I don’t think they’d put a kid here in the back of the house.”

“Maybe just a playroom then, like your basement?”

Kenny got up and pointed the camera and flashlight around the room.  It seemed really weird that the toys weren’t boxed – or gone completely.  Didn’t the Wenzlicks have any family to sort through their possessions?

All around the room, he saw older versions of toys he’d played with as a kid:  Legos, the GI Joe’s and even a Hungry, Hungry Hippos game with a smashed box.  The Legos formed two castles a few feet apart, with the Joes scattered on the floor between them.  It looked like someone was right in the middle of a battle when they were interrupted.

Somehow, being in that room with the Wenzlick boys’ things didn’t seem right.  Kenny realized he was standing in the middle of a game that had been on pause for over 30 years.  He was in no hurry to see what secrets the rest of the house held, but he didn’t want to stay in that room, looking at the game that would never be finished.

“Ok, room number one:  GI Joe’s and assorted toys.  You ready to move on?”  Kenny stood up slowly, thankful the room was finally standing still.

“Take your time, Dude.  What’s your hurry?  You’ve got a whole hour to go.  Show me the whole room first and then move on.”

“All right.”  Kenny walked to the other end of the room, which had windows all along the wall, but he couldn’t see any light coming in from outside, and even though he’d put in brand new batteries, the light barely cut through the darkness.  There should have been a little light from outside, but the light of the flashlight would have to be enough.

In spite of the darkness, he didn’t walk into any cobwebs.  He at least had that to be thankful for.

When he got to the end wall, he saw a cheap TV stand with an old, box-style TV.  There was a video player connected to the TV that looked like the kind that took tapes.  Kenny couldn’t remember what it was called, but it looked enormous compared to the new player at his house.

“Is that a VCR on the counter there?”  Derrick asked, as Kenny walked up to the stand.

“Sure, I guess so.  I’m not sure.”

“Ok, well there doesn’t seem to be anything all that interesting down there.  Show me the rest of the room.”

Kenny turned and shined the light toward the opposite end of the room.  He could see closet doors there, and he knew what Derrick was going to say before he said it.

“Open that closet.  I want to see what’s in there.”

Kenny hesitated in the middle of the room.  He was right in front of the door where he’d come in.  Opposite that door, he saw a second door that would take him farther into the house.  He looked down at the timer.  A little over 90 seconds had passed.

He sighed.  He would have plenty of time to show Derrick the entire house, and that meant he’d probably be opening every single door he came to, which meant eventually he would probably see something he didn’t want to see.

He steeled himself as he walked up to the closet.  He didn’t want to show Derrick any fear, so he walked up to the closet and quickly pulled the door open.

Expecting a skeleton, or worse, he found old coats and dresses with bright floral prints as well as boxes of what looked like junk.  No skeletons.

“Need a new dress, Derrick?  Looks like they have plenty of extras.  Probably fit you too.”

“I’m all set.  Besides, that would just be weird since they look just like the ones you’re always wearing.”

“Funny.  There’s nothing to see here.  You want me to move on?”  Kenny shut the closet door.  He wasn’t sure why, but it seemed like he should.

“Yeah, go ahead.”  Kenny turned to head for the door.  “Whoa, what was that?”

Kenny froze, a little startled.  “What do you mean?”

“When you turned around, I thought I saw something!”

“What?  What did you see?”

No answer.

“Derrick?  You there?”

“Yeah.”

“What did you see?”

“I don’t know.  I just thought I saw something for sec.  Sorry.  Nevermind.”

“Ok.”  Kenny stepped over to the door opposite the one he came in through, turned the handle, and opened the door, shining the light into the next room.

“Oh my gosh, it’s hideous!”  Kenny stepped into the room.

“What is it?”

“This carpet is the most putrid mauve I’ve ever seen.  It’s horrible.  It looks like that pink Jell-o stuff your mom makes.”

“Oh, good grief.  I thought you saw something.”

“I did, looks like the family room.”  The L-shaped room was about 20 feet by 15 with a couple blue couches with little pinkish diamond shapes.  Kenny figured they went with the carpet, but there really wasn’t enough light to tell.

“And I like the pink stuff my mom makes.”

“What is that stuff called?”

“Uh, we call it… The Pink Stuff.”

“Duh,” Kenny shook his head.

“What’s so funny?”  Derrick asked.

“What do you mean?”

“Did you see something funny?”  Derrick asked.

“What are you talking about?”

“What were you laughing at?”

“Me?  I wasn’t laughing.  I was just looking around.”

“I heard you laughing.”

“I’m having an awful lot of fun in here, believe me, but I wasn’t laughing.”

Kenny stepped farther into the room and swept the light to the left, shining it along a paneled wall.  His mom hated paneling, but Kenny always liked to look for faces in the wood.  He decided not to look this time for fear he might find a face or two sneering back at him.

Along the first paneled wall, to his left, was a large entertainment center with another small, square TV.  There was a love seat on the wall across from the TV and a couch straight ahead on the side wall.  He imagined the Wenzlick family, sitting on the couches, watching the TV.  He could almost see them there, staring at him through the darkened screen.

Turning to his right to scan the room, he saw another outside door just past a short stairway down and a short stairway up.  He wasn’t ready to take the stairs so he turned back to his left toward the entertainment center.  When he got a little closer to it he saw the top of the entertainment center was covered with knick-knacks, mostly owls.  He walked up to the TV and without thinking, pressed the power button.

Nothing happened.

“Alright.  See anything you want in here?  I think they got a couple extra owls.”

“That’s ok.  I’m good.  What is so stinking funny?”

“Dude, what are you talking about?”

“What do you keep laughing at?”

“I’m not laughing, man.  Knock it off.  If you’re trying to freak me out, you don’t have to.”

“I think you’re trying to freak me out with that evil laugh.”

“I don’t hear anything.  It’s gotta be in your head.”

“Let’s call it off.  You don’t have to do this, Kenny.”

“That’s ok.  This is weird, but kind of cool.  I can’t believe I’m the one in the Wenzlick house, and you’re the one freaking out.”

“I’m not freaking out.  I just don’t think this was a good idea anymore.”

“You’re right, Derrick.  It was a really bad idea for you, but me?  I’m getting an iPod in about…”  He turned the iPod around.   “54 more minutes.”

Kenny turned away from the entertainment center and began to circle around the room, showing Derrick the furniture still arranged for TV viewing that hadn’t taken place in decades.  He worked his way around the room and found an old upright piano in the back corner.

Reaching out with two fingers, he started plunking the keys, making a high pitched, obnoxious, off-key sound.
“What are you doing?”

“Saw it on Ghostbusters.”

“Well, then I guess it makes perfect sense to do that right now.” Derrick deadpanned.  “Hey, what are those pictures on top of the piano?”

“I don’t know.  They’re pretty dusty.”  Kenny transferred the iPod and light into one hand and used his sleeve to wipe off the biggest picture.  What he saw shocked him.

There, on top of the piano, was a picture of THE Wenzlick family, but none of them looked evil or crazy like the stories said.  In fact, they all looked perfect.  Mr. Wenzlick had on a jacket and tie.  Mrs. Wenzlick, who was nothing short of beautiful, was wearing a light blue dress which matched her eyes as well as her husband’s tie, and the boys were wearing darker blue ties to go with their parents outfits.

Kenny chuckled to himself as he held up the iPod and light.  “Derrick Bruner, meet the perfect family, Ma and Pa Wenzlick and the boys.”

The Wenzlicks really looked like the perfect family, not a hair out of place on anyone, everyone smiling, a nice picture, so which one of them was a killer?  Some said Mr. Wenzlick came home one night in a drunken rage, but others said it was Mrs. Wenzlick who snapped.

The police closed their investigation without providing definite answers, but they assured the community there was no public danger.  Did that mean the killer died in the house along with the rest of the family?

“Whoa, that’s really them, isn’t it?  They look really…”

“Normal?”

“Yeah.  Pretty much.  Dude, check out the mom.  She’s kinda hot. Hard to believe one of them went crazy and killed the whole family.”

“Hot Mrs. W must not have had dinner ready on time.”

“Or maybe she did, but handsome Mr. W decided to make an extra stop on his way home from work.”

“Something like that.  Ready to move on?”

“Yeah, what else do you see?”

“Looks like a small bathroom here in the back.  Nothing to it really, toilet, sink and shower stall.”  Kenny waved the light and the camera into the bathroom.

“Anything in the toilet?”

“You’re sick, Derrick.  I’m moving on.”

Kenny turned back to the family room.  He was at the end of the L, so he had to go around the couch, which was against the wall opposite the bathroom wall.  He swept the light (and camera) around in front to light his path.

“What was that?”  Derrick asked in a high-pitched shriek.

“What do you mean?”

“Kenny, don’t move.  There’s something in the room with you.”

“What are you talking about?  I don’t see anything.”

“It’s a shadow, right there in front of you.  Get out of there!”

Derrick was good.  Kenny believed him for a minute there.  “Dude, you almost had me there.  First ‘Don’t move!’ then ‘Get out of there!’  I –“

“Go now.  Run.  It’s reaching out to get you.”

“There’s nothing here, you dork.  Unless you think the sofa’s about to attack.  It is a little scary.”

“Please, Kenny, get out of that room.  Now.  It looks like…  It looks like a man.”

“Really?  Well that’s pretty spooky there buddy.  Is it one of the Wenzlicks?”

“Oh, oh, ok.  It’s moving away.  No.  No way.  It just disappeared through that wall in front of you.”

“Wow, Derrick.  Why don’t you just buy a skateboard?  You have the money.”

“Kenny, that house is messed up.  Just get out of there, ok.”

“Nope.  I said I’d give you the tour, and now I’m gonna do it.”  Derrick watched his screen as Kenny walked across the room past the spot where the figure had stood.  “Oooh.  It’s cold in here.”  He was standing right where the shadow had been.  “I just got a chill.”

“Kenny, please just get out of there.  I don’t want to do this anymore.”

“Really, Derrick?  I’m just starting to have fun.  Maybe I should call Kacy and give her the tour instead.”

No answer.

“See –“

“That’s a good idea!”

“What?”

“That’s a good idea.  Call Kacy and tell her what you’re doing.  There’s something in that house with you, Kenny.  If you don’t believe me, show her.”

“Sure, sounds good to me, but what about your tour?  We’re about to go into the main part of the house, you know, where they say everything happened.”

“No.  I’m done with this.  Call me if…  Call me if you need anything.”

“Okay, I will.  Are you going to stay out there?”

“Yeah, I won’t leave you there alone.”

“Dude, I am alone.”

“You know what I mean.”

“You sure you don’t want to come in and check out the basement with me?  I bet it’s creepy.”

“You need to get out of there while—“

“While I still can?  Nice.”  Kenny crossed the family room and faced the two sets of stairs.  “Ok, let me call the beautiful Kacy Fairbanks.”

“Ok, bye.”

“Later, Dude!”

Kenny wasn’t sure if Derrick was messing with him or not because he’d never seen Derrick afraid.  If Derrick was just messing with him, he had to stay in the house for the whole 60 minutes.  On the other hand, if Derrick was really scared, that might be even better.  Kenny would earn some respect to go with his new iPod.  That is, as long as he made it out of the house.

He stood in front of the stairs, contemplating.  He might lose his signal in the basement, but in order to really win the bet, he had to go down there.  Wasn’t the basement always where the ghost was waiting, buried behind a false wall or in a secret passage?  The stories were almost always the same.  If there was a ghost in the house, it would probably be down there.

Kenny didn’t know what he’d do if he saw a ghost.  He didn’t really believe in ghosts like in Scrooge.  He knew from watching Ghost Catchers that ghosts were really more like a recording left behind, some kind of psychic energy that imprinted a place and only played back when a person was there to see it.  If that was true, seeing a ghost would be a frightening but ultimately harmless experience.  Might was well get the basement over with now while he still had the nerve.

He started slowly down the stairs, which were covered with a funky patterned yellow linoleum.  Seeing the linoleum, he wondered if the basement might not be so bad.  He was imagining a damp, dark dungeon with a dirt floor and maybe a couple long dead prisoners hanging from shackles on the walls.

He figured that image must have come from a movie, but he couldn’t remember what it might have been.  Didn’t matter.  He was going down there, and he wasn’t taking any chances.  He was recording the basement with the iPod to prove to Derrick he’d been there.

He started down the steps when he realized the wall on his left had a handle.  He reached out and pulled it, but it was stuck.  He was about to yank it open when he realized it was a sliding door.  He slid it open and found piles of old shoes and other miscellaneous junk.  Nothing too interesting.  He checked the other side and found another storage compartment filled with boots and a few boxes which held pieces of glass in a bunch of different colors.

When he continued down the steps, he found a small landing at the bottom where he stopped to listen before opening the basement door.  Nothing.  There was no sound, at all.  That was somehow worse than hearing something.  He shifted the iPod around in his hand and started recording.

“We’re going into the basement of the famous Wenzlick house in Flint, Michigan, where no one has dared go in over 30 years.”

Somehow, talking his way through gave him courage, so he decided to have a little fun.  “We’re hoping for an interview with a member of the Wenzlick family, who can at last explain what happened that fateful October night 30 years ago.”

He pushed open the basement door, which provided an excellent haunted house creak.  “For those of you watching at home, that was the actual door; no sound effects were added.”

He stepped into the basement and let the door shut behind him.

“Is anyone down here?”  Kenny saw his breath rise when he spoke.  He didn’t think it should be so cold in the basement.

“Yes, good.  Glad you could make it, Mr. Wenzlick.  And for the folks watching at home, what’s your first name?”

“Thanks, Ben.  You can call me Kenny.”

“Nice to meet you, too.  This is a lovely basement you have here, aside from that smell.  Is that a pond in the corner there?”  Kenny shined the light in the corner where a black puddle reflected light like it was a thousand feet deep.  He knew the puddle was probably a half inch at most.  Still, he waited a moment to be sure there wasn’t a black hand coming out of the water after him.  There wasn’t.

“Ah, good.  I see.  I like the platform over here with the washer and dryer.  Wouldn’t want to drown in the puddles while you’re doing laundry, right Mr. Wenzlick?”

“Oh, sorry.  Right, Ben.”

“Wow, whoever did the laundry wasn’t very tall, huh?”  He stepped onto the platform, and his head almost hit the ceiling.  From the platform’s edge, he saw a large opening in the middle of the basement, above the furnace.  It looked like the perfect spot to hang a prisoner…or intruder.

“Great.  Yes.  Thank you.  I appreciate that.  You’re a handsome gentleman too, I might add, and you seem pretty easy going for a notorious killer.”

“So, if you don’t mind me asking, what made you do it?”

“Really, that’s interesting.  Thanks for sharing.”

“Would mind telling us how you did it?”

“Oh, no.  I’ll just take your word for it.  Thanks for the offer though.”

Kenny noticed the basement floor wasn’t smooth.  It was like the concrete had been poured piecemeal.  He’d never seen anything like it.

The furnace was in the middle of the basement.  He saw a sump pump on the side by the laundry.  In the back, he saw shelves stocked with cans, but he couldn’t see what was in them.  Probably eyeballs, fingers and toes.

“So what’s buried underneath this uneven concrete?”

“Well, to be perfectly honest with you Ben, that’s a little gruesome, but I do appreciate your honesty as well as your willingness to share.”

Kenny stepped off the laundry platform, walked over to the shelves and picked up a can.  “MMM, pickles and grape jelly, my favorite.”

“Got enough to last you for eternity there, don’tcha Ben?”  Sealed in their containers, he wondered if they were spoiled, but even if they weren’t, the thought of eating them made his stomach turn.

“Well, I’d love to share a jar with you, but I need to keep moving, so the folks at home can finish the tour.”

“Oh, that’s a tempting offer.  It does sound like great fun, but I’m going to have to pass this time.”

Kenny circled around the furnace.  He was in the home stretch now, almost out of the basement, but he had a weird feeling someone, something was right behind him.  He felt the urge to run.

He hesitated, but when he remembered Derrick wasn’t watching, he clicked off the camera and ran out of the basement, stopping at the top of the stairs to catch his breath.

“Well, that’ll be a You Tube classic.  I’ll be the Beiber of Broadcasting when it goes viral.”

He looked down at the iPod and couldn’t believe what he saw.  The timer only had about 20 minutes left.  His stomach clenched.  He’d been down there over a half hour.  Impossible.

He checked the recording he’d made.  The iPod recorded 38 minutes.  How could that be?  He fast forwarded through the recording.

As he looked down at the screen, he noticed his hands were covered in dirt (Dirt as black as the basement pond), and he saw the knees of his jeans were coved with black sludge.  What was going on?

His head started to spin as he watched the recording.  He saw himself quickly circling around the basement, conducting his interview, but then he stopped suddenly in the back corner.  In the recording, he just stood in place for several minutes, in a trance.  Why didn’t he remember this?

As the recoding played on, his stomach churned and the room started to move again.  He thought he might pass out, and finally he collapsed to the floor and dry heaved.  He thought he was going to die.

This was wrong.  Everything in this house was wrong.

“What are you trying to do?”  He called out.

After a few seconds, the nausea subsided.  He sat up and waited for the room to quit spinning.  When it did, he got to his knees and finally stood.

He was in a breezeway, and there was a door to the outside a few steps away.  It was probably the main door the Wenzlicks used.  He could use it right now.  He could leave and never come back.

There was something in this house, a force that was causing strange things to happen to his body and his brain, but it was only a recording, a recording he just didn’t understand.

If he stayed a few minutes longer, finished his 60 minutes, maybe he would figure it out.  Whatever was going on in the house, it seemed to be most intense in the basement, and he had no intentions of going back down there.

He checked the timer.  He had less than 10 minutes to go.  He turned away from the outside door and climbed the stairs instead.

As he walked up the steps, there were closet doors on his right.  He opened them for Derrick’s benefit, but didn’t really look in them.

Shutting the doors, he continued up the steps and stopped in front of the door to the main part of the house, steeling himself for what he might see on the other side.

The kitchen.  He knew from the stories, something terrible happened in the kitchen.

BWAHK!  BWAHK!  BWAAAAAAHK!

He screamed and jumped high enough to make it halfway to Heaven, almost dropping the iPod.  When he got a handle on it again, he realized Kacy was calling him.

Perfect timing.  He’d have company while he finished the last 10 minutes of the bet.  He took a second to regain his composure and answered.  “Hi, Kacy!”

“Hi, Kenny,” Kenny was surprised to see Kacy outside, with someone standing right behind her.  Derrick must have told what was going on and asked her to meet him.

“What’s going on?” Kenny asked.  “What are you doing out there?”

“A better question is ‘What are you doing IN THERE?”

“I’m just winning a bet.  Right, Derrick.”  Kenny turned the handle to the kitchen door and was assaulted by an overpowering scent of Pine-Sol.

“What have you been doing in there, Kenny?”  Derrick asked, standing over Kacy’s shoulder.  “I’ve been trying to call you for over half an hour.”

“I was just checking things out.  Wow, someone kept a pretty clean kitchen.  I can still smell the cleanser.”

“Kenny, you can’t stay in there.  Come out now or we’re coming in to get you.” Kacy warned.

“I’m not going in there,” Derrick began.  “Kenny, no tricks, I’m serious.  You win.  The iPod’s yours.”

Kenny entered a small kitchen with dark wood cabinets.  The cabinets had dark splatter marks on them, and Kenny was pretty sure he knew what it was.  He’d seen this kind of thing on TV.  This was where it happened, or at least where it started.

“I only have 8 more minutes, and I haven’t finished the tour.  I think I understand what’s going on in here.”  Kenny shivered as the temperature dropped.  “I got this.  You wanna see what’s in any of these?”  Kenny stepped past the stove and reached for the cabinet to the right of the sink.  “I’m betting glasses.  Yup.”

“Kenny, I know you don’t believe me, but turn the iPod around and show Kacy the room.”

“I believe you, Derrick.  There’s something in this house, but I’m just not scared anymore.  Whatever is here, it isn’t dangerous.  It’s just like a recording; a psychic echo is what they call it on TV.”

Kenny closed the kitchen cabinet and turned around.  He saw the refrigerator, built into the wall.  It must have been in the opening he saw from the basement.  To the right of the fridge there was another door.  “Do you want door number one, the fridge?  Or door number 2?”

Kacy answered, “I don’t think I’d open that refrigerator door.”

“Very, well.  The lady’s chosen door number 2.  Oh, what’s this?  A bathroom?  I guess that’s why it’s door number 2.”

“That’s really mature, Kenny.”  Derrick scolded.

The bathroom was tiny; the toilet and vanity were crammed into such a small amount of space, the shower took up almost half the room.

“Should I check behind the shower curtain?”

“Sure.”  Kacy answered.  Derrick gave her a look.  “What?  This is kinda cool.”

“I know.  It is, isn’t it!” Kenny answered.  “A real haunted house.”  He reached out and slid the curtain aside.

“Ok, my gosh, Derrick.  It’s horrible!”

Behind the curtain was a yellowed bathroom wall with weird, blue paisley type flower patters.  Kenny chuckled as he closed the curtain, but when he turned to leave, he found himself looking into the bathroom mirror at a reflection that wasn’t his.  Fear hit him in a wave as a woman’s face stared back at him, the very beautiful, very dead, and apparently very angry Mrs. Wenzlick.

He heard gasps from Kacy and Derrick, and he knew they’d seen it too.  It was real.  She started to reach for him, and the iPod slipped out of his hand, landing on the sink with a crash.

He quickly grabbed the iPod, and when he looked back in the mirror, she was gone.  Kenny’s pale white faced stared back at him, wide-eyed.

His first instinct was to run, but then he remembered, “It’s just a recording.”  She wasn’t really coming through the mirror after him.  She couldn’t harm him.  He was terrified momentarily, but he was safe.

“Did you guys see that?”  His voice cracked, so he quickly continued.  “She was here.  That was amazing.”

“Kenny, get out of the house.  You proved your point.  You’re brave… or really stupid.  Get out of there before you get hurt.”  Derrick was reaching around Kacy to talk into her phone.

“No, you don’t get it.  I’m ok.  She can’t hurt me because she’s not really there.”  Kenny walked out of the bathroom, his heart pounding.  “Don’t worry, Mrs. W.  I’ll be leaving in about – he looked down at the iPod – 5 more minutes.”

He walked through the kitchen, headed for the next room, a dining room with dark curtains and an even darker table and chairs, one of the few rooms that looked like a haunted house.  He stopped for a second and noticed there were stained glass windows in the front.  They didn’t seem to go with the haunted house theme, and Kenny wasn’t sure if he’d ever seen stained glass like that in a regular house.

“Hey, I’m at the front door.  Do you want me to open the coat closet?”  Without waiting for an answer, he walked to the other side of the room and opened the door.  “Ah, coats!  And I don’t know what this is.  It kinda looks like a brown R2D2 with a – oh, I get it.”  He lifted up a hose connected to the droid.  “It’s a vacuum.”

“I’ve never seen one like that before.”  Kacy replied.

Kenny only had a couple minutes left, so he quickly moved to the next room, a small living room with another couch and entertainment center.  A stairway came off the living room to his right, and along the same wall was another door on the far side of the room.   The entertainment center was in between them.  He held up the iPod and light, showing Derrick and Kacy the room, and then he walked over and pushed the door open revealing a small bedroom, made smaller by a huge bed and dresser that took up all but a narrow path to a closet in the back.  “Looks like someone let the water out of their water bed.  Should I check the closet in here too, Derrick?”

“I don’t care.”  Derrick seemed to be conceding defeat, which was wonderful.

“Ok, then I’m just going to head upstairs and finish this.”

When he turned, Derrick and Kacy gasped and room got cold.  “Did you see something else?  Did she follow me?”  He waved the iPod across the room, giving them a complete view.

Neither answered him.

“You’ve lost your mind.”  Kacy finally said.  “Why won’t you come outside?”

“I don’t need to.  I have this place figured out.  It’s like I’m watching a movie.  No, like I’m in a movie, and I want to see the end.”

He walked through the living room to the stairs.  He looked up, but couldn’t see far because the stairs made a complete turn on their way to the top.  As he walked up the stairs, he noticed the air was stale and cool, but not cold like the kitchen or basement.  If the energy here was weaker, that was fine.  He really wanted to see the rest of the house, to finish the movie.

At the top of the stairs, he came to a small hallway with one door straight ahead, one at end and another just to his right.  The door to his right turned out to be a closet door, which he opened and quickly shut in order to get on to the bedrooms.

The bedroom door next to the closet was ajar, so he headed that direction first.  Pushing the door open, he found a double bed with Star Wars sheets at one end of the room and a dresser centered on the other end.  The top part of the paneled walls at each end of the room slanted inward, and on the slanted walls there were posters of Detroit sports stars Kenny had heard of, but who hadn’t played for a long time.  The way the walls followed the roof line, the posters were leaning forward, over the bed on one end of the room and over the dresser on the other.

Kenny didn’t like the way they seemed to lean over him, but he stepped into the middle of the room and waved the iPod around, giving Kacy and Derrick a 360 degree view.  He turned toward the door just in time to watch it slam shut in front of him.

That was the moment when he really began to doubt his movie theory.  Something moved that door, and from the way it slammed, that something wanted his attention.  He feared he was about to come face to face with one of the Wenzlick parents or some far worse horror, but what he saw when he turned away from the door shocked him.

There in front of him were two boys about his age, one a little taller than the other, the same boys from the picture on the piano, the Wenzlick boys.  He looked at them, and they were looking at him, trying to tell him something.

He couldn’t hear what they were saying, so he tried to read their lips.  When his fear made him take a step back, they followed him with their eyes.  He felt panic welling up within himself.  They were no recording.  The smaller one pointed at the wall behind the bed.

First, Kenny looked up at the posters, not understanding, but then he saw that the lower, vertical paneling had a cutout held closed by wing nuts in the corners.  That was where the boy was pointing.  He wanted Kenny to remove the panel.

Kenny looked down at the iPod to ask Derrick and Kacy if they were seeing what he saw, but the only sound he could make sounded like a puppy whining.  With the dead boys looking on, he set the iPod and flashlight on the bed and started pulling the bed away from the wall.  It slid along the floor easily, so Kenny was able to pull it to himself, scoot back and pull it again.  When it was far enough from the wall, the paneling fell forward exposing a hidden alcove.  Kenny picked up the light but left the iPod on the bed; he was impelled to enter the alcove.

Lifting the panel out of the way, he shined the light inside and saw a few boxes pushed into the back corner and a disassembled Christmas tree, but nothing really of interest.  He looked back into the bedroom.  They were still there watching him.  They lips were no longer moving, but their message was clear, “Go in.”

He did.

The alcove was a long narrow corridor that looked like it went the length of the house.  He had to hunch over because the alcove only about 4 feet high at the top and narrowed at a 60 degree angle.  He took a couple more steps, and as he shined the light deeper into the opening, he saw something that made his blood run cold.

Beside a pile of blankets, sitting on the wooden floor, about two thirds of the way down the alcove, he saw a little girl.

Her round face was as beautiful as her mother’s, and she had the same dark hair as her brothers’.  It wasn’t until after she started to crawl toward him that he noticed she was missing her lower legs and one of her arms ended in a nub just after her elbow.

Kenny was horrified at first, but he soon realized she was not a threat.  He fell to his knees in bewilderment as she crawled toward him.

No one ever mentioned the Wenzlicks had a little girl.  He wondered if anyone outside the family knew the perfect Wenzlicks had an imperfect daughter.

He watched as she came closer, and though he felt some fear, he knew he wasn’t in danger.  She crawled up to him, looked up at his face.  Then she continued past him and out to the edge of the alcove where she stopped and looked back, her eyes asking a question.

Kenny thought he understood.  He crawled deeper into the alcove to retrieve the bundle of blankets.  It was starting to make sense.  He realized what was inside the bundle and what he should do.

After he carried the bundle out of the alcove and reentered the bedroom where her brothers were waiting, the little girl followed.  When she saw the boys, the little girl raced toward them and let the older one pick her up.  His eyes met Kenny’s, and they exchanged a silent nod.

Thank you.

After more than 3 decades, the dead boys and their sister were together again.  They turned away from Kenny and started walking away.  Looking over her brother’s shoulder, the little girl smiled for the first time, and Kenny felt his nose and eyes burning as they began to fade from view.

When the Wenzlick kids disappeared, Kenny knew they wouldn’t be coming back.  He looked down at the bundle in his arms.  It barely weighed anything.  She was so small.

Kenny set the bundle gently on the bedspread while he closed the alcove and pushed the bed back into place.  It wasn’t until the bed was back against the wall that he heard the timer on the iPod going off.

It was over.

Kenny picked up the iPod, flashlight, and the bundle of blankets, and opened the door to the hall.  He looked down at the iPod; it had dropped the signal.  Kacy and Derrick were gone.  Kenny wasn’t surprised.

He thought about looking in the other bedrooms, to finish the tour, but he knew the movie was over.  If he went in the rooms, in one, he’d find the younger boy’s things, but in the other, he was pretty sure he’d find nothing but an empty room.  There would be no trace of the little girl who wasn’t as perfect as her brothers.  He decided after what he’d already seen, he couldn’t handle that.

As he walked down the winding stairs, the house didn’t feel the same.  Its dark power was gone.  It had given up its mysteries and was now just an empty shell.  When he was back on the main floor, he walked to the closest exit, the front door and stepped back out into the night.

Closing the door behind himself, he left the porch and walked to the side yard to where Kacy and Derrick were waiting.

“Kenny, are you ok?” Kacy asked.

He didn’t answer.

“We didn’t know what to do.  The call dropped, and you weren’t answering.”

Kenny still said nothing.  He handed Derrick the iPod and flashlight and walked up to Kacy and hugged her tightly with his free arm.

“What’s that?” Derrick asked, seeing the blanket.

“It’s the Wenzlicks’ dark secret, the reason for everything.”

Kacy and Derrick both stared at Kenny.

“A little girl who wasn’t perfect enough, I don’t even know her name.  One of you should call the police.  I’m going home.”  Kenny turned and walked back to the front porch and laid the blankets down by the door.

When he stood up, Derrick tried to hand back the iPod, but Kenny refused to take it.  “That isn’t what this was all about.  It’s not why I had to go in there.”

“Kenny, it’s yours.”  Derrick held it out in front of him.  He wasn’t going to take “No” for an answer.

Kenny didn’t want the iPod anymore, but he knew Derrick wouldn’t budge, so he reached out and took it.  “Thanks, Derrick.”

He turned and walked home in silence, never turning back to see if Kacy or Derrick followed.

When he got home, he kicked off his wet sneakers and went upstairs to change his clothes.  As he tried to slide his pants off, something poked his leg.  He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small rectangular box about the size of pen box.  It was coated with black sludge that he knew must have come from the Wenzlicks’ basement.  He didn’t know how the object got in his pocket or what it was, but he took it to the bathroom sink and rinsed the dirt off.

As he wiped the sludge off the case, he saw the inscription, “Emily, August 3, 1978.”

The Tween Anthology February 16, 2011

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Tween Anthology Open to All Michigan Writers

 So, what is all this about?

 I’m putting together an anthology of speculative fiction for ages 8-12.  Stories can be Science Fiction, Fantasy, Horror, or any combination of the three, but all submissions must be from a Michigan writer (ie. anyone who lives or has lived in Michigan).  Whichever genre you decide on, the stories have to be FUN!   

I’m looking for well-told, original stories that appeal to tweens.  The writing should not be dumbed-down at all for this age group, but please be sure the content is appropriate (think PG rating).   

To get a better idea of what I’m looking for, you can check out my short story, “The Kid From The Other Side.”

 Are you an editor? 

 No, I’m an unpublished writer interested in getting the word out about my own work. 

 OK, you’re not an editor, so who are you? 

 I’m a writer who started writing stories for my own kids a few years back, and through a partnership with a local teacher, my work has been used in the classroom for the past few years, where I’ve found other kids really like my work too. 

 I’ve written several short stories for the tween age group which have been very well received, and I’m planning on releasing my own short story collection soon after this anthology. 

 Why make your first publication an anthology?

 Marketing is the toughest part of the writing/publishing process, and this anthology is my idea to create a marketing partnership with other Michigan writers, so we can all reach a broader audience.  The idea is to assemble stories from multiple writers, self-publish the book and turn everyone loose to sell it, using their own personal platform and connections.

 And why do you think you can edit an anthology?

 As the guy who dreamed up this little project, I will review works and determine suitability, but don’t worry, this isn’t a setup where I get your story and tell you how awful it is and offer to help you fix it for a fee.   

I am a good copy editor, but please be diligent about your own copy editing.  I don’t want to see any first drafts.  I’ve read some authors whose grammar and/or punctuation was so bad I couldn’t even finish their story.  I’m looking for a finished product here. 

I’ll give feedback on all submissions within two weeks, and maybe make suggestions or tell you why it fits (or doesn’t fit) this project.  Stories should be between 2,500 and 7,500 words; a little longer or shorter might be okay if the story is a good fit.  My goal is to get at least 10 stories and I’m looking to add several more writers (the bigger the marketing team, the better). 

 Reprints are ok for this project as long as no one else holds the rights to the story.  There will be no payment for your story, but any author published in the book will be able purchase as many copies as they want at cost.  We won’t know the exact cost (or determine a list price) until we get a little closer to publication.

 Right now my goal is to go to print by Summer 2011.  Do you have a story to submit?  If so, email it to william12evans@aol.com with the title, “State of Strange.”

 

 

Book Review: Seize the Night by Dean Koontz October 27, 2010

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My first issue when I finished Seize the Night was figuring out where to put it on my Top Ten Dean Koontz Novels list.  I really liked the first Chris Snow book, Fear Nothing, (#2 on the list), so I had high hopes for the sequel going in (which is always dangerous because it sets me up for a major let down), but I was pleasantly surprised by Seize the Night.  It not only continued the story, but it also managed to surprise me, expanding the story arc in ways I didn’t see coming.

 Seize the Night takes place a month after the events of Fear Nothing, and although Chris and friends survived the monkey attack at Bobby’s beach house, things are not about to get better in Moonlight Bay.  The conspiracy has enveloped everything from the police department to the churches.  It’s only a matter of time until the trouble in Moonlight Bay spreads, and even if Chris and friends can unravel the conspiracy, that doesn’t mean there’s anything they can do to stop Chris’ mother’s retrovirus from infecting the world.

As if things aren’t bad enough in Moonlight Bay, the novel opens with Chris and Orson stumbling upon the abduction of an ex-girlfriend’s five-year-old son.  While on one of their nightly excursions, they come by right after the abduction and immediately take off to chase down the culprit.   

Where does the kidnapper’s trail lead?   Back to Fort Wyvern, the moth-balled military base where genetic experiments escaped in a way no one could have imagined.  Chris assumes the abduction is related to the genetic experiments at Wyvern, but Chris’ investigation leads him to the Mystery Train project and discoveries even more bizarre than the retrovirus and genetically altered monkeys from Fear Nothing, discoveries that will result in the death of one of Chris’ inner circle.   

Although I love this book, I do have a little bit of a Dean Koontz rant to get out of my system.  I promised myself I wouldn’t read Seize the Night until Koontz finally published the third (and final?) Chris Snow novel, Ride the Storm.  I was fine until I decided to write my Top Ten Dean Koontz Novels post.  Fear Nothing came in at #2, so how could I have it as my second favorite and not include a review?  (I hadn’t written a review because I read it before I started the blog.)  Knowing I needed to write the review, I didn’t want to go completely off memory, so I reread Fear Nothing.

This time, I had to find out what happened next, so I took Seize the Night with me on vacation.  Now, after finishing Seize the Night, I’m stuck in the same boat as many other Koontz fans who have already waited 10 years for Ride the Storm. 

Fear Nothing was published in 1998 with Seize the Night following in 1999.  The publish date for Ride the Storm?  2000?  No.  2003?  Guess again.  2005?  Nice try.  2007?  Nope.  2010?  Not looking good.  The question now isn’t when will Koontz complete the Moonlight Bay trilogy, but will he?

 We should all stage a boycott of Koontz until he gives us another Chris Snow book — and we don’t want a throw away novel that doesn’t really continue the story like he did with Odd Thomas (Forever Odd). 

 I know, it would never work.  I’m already excited about Koontz’ new ghost story, “What the Night Knows”.  I’m sure I’ll be checking that out sometime soon, but for now, see below for the rating of Seize the Night.

 Rating 9.5 out of 10

Top Ten Stephen King Books October 26, 2010

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This is my list of my FAVORITE Stephen King books.  This isn’t a list of the scariest novels.  Pet Sematary is one of the scariest King novels, but it just misses this list at #11.

Most of these stories have scary scenes, but this list is based on several criteria:  characters (did I like/care about them), story (was it a good/believable plot) and scariness (this is a King list after all).

The other caveat is that I have to have read the book.  Kind of makes sense, doesn’t it?  After the list, I’ll show my “to do” list, the books I want to read but haven’t gotten to yet.

TITLE TYPE PUBLISHED RANK
The Stand: The Complete & Uncut Edition Novel May-90 1
‘Salem’s Lot Novel Dec-74 2
Bag of Bones Novel Sep-98 3
IT Novel Sep-86 4
The Dark Tower IV: Wizard and Glass Novel Jun-03 5
The Shining Novel Dec-76 6
The Dark Tower I: The Gunslinger Novel Jun-03 7
Night Shift Story Collection Dec-77 8
Skeleton Crew Story Collection Jun-85 9
Everything’s Eventual Story Collection Mar-02 10

 

To Do List:

TITLE TYPE PUBLISHED
Carrie Novel Apr-74
Misery Novel Jun-87
Black House Novel Sep-01
Lisey’s Story Novel Oct-06
Duma Key Novel Jan-08
Just After Sunset Story Collection Nov-08

Click here to check out my Top Ten for Dean Koontz:

http://lightnessanddark.wordpress.com/2010/05/12/top-ten-dean-koontz-novels/

Book Review: Fear Nothing by Dean Koontz September 22, 2010

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Christopher Snow may not be Dean Koontz’ best fictional creation (at this point, I’ll reserve that honor for the venerable fry cook from Pico Mundo, California, who sees the dead and does something about it), but the Snowman is definitely a close second to Odd Thomas.

I was thinking about shutting down the book review portion of this blog because even though I have still been reading, I haven’t had much time for writing reviews.  Even now, I’m several books behind.

What made me decide to get going again was I noticed some traffic on my Top Ten Dean Koontz Novels post.  When I looked back at the post, I saw three things.  First, the #2 book on my list (Fear Nothing) doesn’t have a review.  Second, Seize the Night was still listed on my “to read” list, so I needed to move it into the top ten.  Third, I needed a review for Seize the Night too.  So here I go, to fix all of the above.

Fear Nothing introduces us to Chris Snow and the rest of Moonlight Bay, California.  Chris is a 28-year-old forced to live in darkness due to a condition called Xeroderma Pigmentosum (XP), which leaves his body unable to repair the damage caused by ultra-violet radiation.  Basically it means he can’t be exposed to sunlight and even has to be careful (and coated in sunscreen) under artificial lights.

Chris, much like Odd Thomas, leads a simple, although unique life.  His disease means he spends his days behind closed doors (and thick curtains), which limits his contact with the outside world.  In spite of the isolation caused by his XP, Chris has developed several friendships, none deeper than his relationships with best girl, Sasha, best surfer bud, Bobby, and best dog, Orson, a lab mix who was a gift from his mother and may be more than he appears to be.

Early on in the novel, it becomes obvious Chris has been kept in the dark in more ways than one.  After the death of his father, whose last words to him are the title of the book, Chris stumbles upon a plot to steal his father’s corpse and realizes this is part of a much larger conspiracy which seems to also involve his mother. 

With his quirky dog, Orson, at his side, the Snowman tries to figure out who would want to steal his father’s body and why, while trying not to get caught by gun-toting mercenaries.  He goes to people he should be able to trust, but he soon learns those who stay loyal to him will end up dead, while friends already entangled in the conspiracy refuse to help him.

After a strange, cryptic conversation with a close family friend describes a strange encounter with a vicious but frighteningly intelligent monkey, Chris begins to question his mother’s death in a car accident two years earlier, realizing her accident might have been on purpose.  He’s also pretty sure his dad’s cancer wasn’t a random occurance.

In the dark of night, Chris manages to put together pieces of the puzzle, including the strange origin and unexpected abilities of his dog and his mother’s involvment in genetic experiments (on rhesus monkeys and other animals) conducted at Wyvern, a mothballed military base which has turned into a ghost town in the last couple of years. 

While Chris and Orson are narrowly escaping harm after being stalked by a troop of vicious, Wyvern monkeys similar to the one his friend described, it is soon apparent something even more dangerous than monkeys has escaped from Wyvern.  Something is infecting the inhabitants of Moonlight Bay, causing physical and emotional changes, and there may be no way to put the genie back in the bottle.

Chris has two choices, Option 1:  risk his life and his friends lives to unravel the conspiracy or Option 2:  sit back and see what happens as the experiments at Wyvern run amok eventually spreading across the globe. 

Not to give any spoilers, but he wouldn’t be a great character if he chose Option 2, now, would he?  Can he unravel the Wyvern conspiracy and reconcile his parents’ involvement without losing those closest to him?

Rating 9.5 out of 10

Mastering Marketing for My Masterpiece(s) June 15, 2010

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Writing brings with it a set of problems.  First is inspiration.  What do I write about?  Next is audience.  Who am I writing to?  Is this a kids’ story, or is it for older audiences?  Then there’s plot.  I have an idea, but what am I going to do with it?  Then characters.  Do I use real-life characters (a bad idea usually), create my own (a better idea, but more difficult) or some combination of the two (the way I usually do it)? 

Once I have my inspiration, know my audience, have the plot and characters nailed down, I have to then find (MAKE) time to write.  When I’ve made the time and finally finished my story, I’m all set, right?  Unfortunately, no.  Once I have my story, I still have to figure out how to get it to the audience.  I could have the most amazing story ever conceived, but if no one reads it, what have I accomplished?

This is why I haven’t been bugging anyone to buy my stuff.  I did send one of my stories, “Wa’er, Mons’er” out to a fiction magazine last year (I even bought 3 extra sets of stamps at the time for future submissions, but the stamps are still in the cabinet, unused).

Knowing what a challenge it is for a writer to get the word out about his masterpiece has made me reluctant to start the process until I have a complete book to sell.  I know others who’ve had success getting stories into magazines, but right now, I’m not sure it would be worth the time it takes to find someone crazy enough to give me a chance.

A local writer friend of mine has a new book to sell, so he’s living the marketing dream right now, going to conventions, hawking his book on his website, and wherever else he can think of. 

It brings up a question in my mind.  How much time should I spend on marketing right now when I barely have time to write?

I’m hoping what my friend is doing works for him, but I’m trying another way to handle the task of marketing.  My idea is to assemble an anthology of short stories by local writers so we can share the task. 

By creating a short story anthology, we all join in on the marketing fun, each author taking the book of short stories to sell alongside our other works.  This will not be a money-maker for anyone involved unless one of us hits it big, but it still could be an excellent marketing tool to gain exposure – to at least each another’s readers.  Maybe fans of local writers like Chris Ringler, KJ Hooten or Mark Eller will also become fans (and buyers) of WP Evans.

The anthology is titled “Stories From the State of Strange.”  The stories will be Fantasy, Science Fiction or Horror aimed at readers aged 8 to 12 (So no sex, profanity, gore, etc.).  Whichever genre you decide on, the stories have to be FUN!  As the guy who dreamed up this little project, I will review works and determine suitability, but this isn’t a setup where I get your story and tell you how awful it is.  Be diligent about your copy editing.  I have read some authors whose grammar and/or punctuation was so bad I couldn’t even finish reading their story.  I’ll give feedback on all submissions, and maybe make suggestions or tell you why it fits (or doesn’t fit) this project. 

Stories should be somewhere between 5,000 and 15,000 words; a little longer or shorter might be okay if the story is a good fit. 

At the time of this post, I have stories from 4 different authors, but my goal is to get at least 10 stories and hopefully add several more writers.  The bigger the marketing team, the better.  You don’t have to be a Michigan writer to make a submission. 

Reprints are ok for this project as long as no one else holds the rights to the story.  There will be no payment for your story, but any author published in the book will be able purchase copies of the book at cost.  We won’t know the exact cost (or determine a list price) until we get a little closer to publication.

Right now my goal is to go to print by Summer 2011.  Do you have a story to submit?  If so, email it to william12evans@aol.com with the title, “State of Strange.”

Top Ten Dean Koontz Novels May 12, 2010

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This list only includes novels I’ve read.  After the Top Ten, I’ll show the novels on my “to read” list.  Any suggestions on which ones to get to next would be appreciated.

TITLE TYPE YEAR RANK
ODD THOMAS Novel 2003 1
FEAR NOTHING (CHRISTOPHER SNOW #1) Novel 1998 2
SEIZE THE NIGHT (CHRISTOPHER SNOW #2) Novel 1999 3
BROTHER ODD (ODD THOMAS #3) Novel 2006 4
FRANKENSTEIN BOOK ONE: PRODIGAL SON Novel 2005 5
ODD HOURS (ODD THOMAS #4) Novel 2008 6
FRANKENSTEIN BOOK TWO: CITY OF NIGHT Novel 2005 7
WHISPERS Novel 1980 8
THE HUSBAND Novel 2006 9
STRANGE HIGHWAYS Story Collection 1995 10

Now here are my Koontz “to read” books. 

TITLE TYPE YEAR
THE KEY TO MIDNIGHT Novel 1979
THE FUNHOUSE Novel 1980
THE DARKEST EVENING OF THE YEAR Novel 2007
FRANKENSTEIN BOOK FOUR: LOST SOULS Novel 2010

 

Please post a comment on any Koontz novels you like that I’ve left off my lists.  Thanks.

Whispers by Dean Koontz May 12, 2010

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Book Review:  Whispers by Dean Koontz

 Whispers, the book that catapulted Dean Koontz to fame, was published in 1980 and was Koontz’ first breakout hit – under his own name.  Koontz has written under 10 names other than his own since he started publishing novels in 1968.

 His first million-seller was The Key to Midnight (in the summer of 1979), published under the “gender neutral” pen name Leigh Nichols.  Not long after, in the fall of 1980, another Koontz pseudonym, Owen West, found million-seller success with The Funhouse.  According to Koontz himself, he was seriously contemplating getting a real job when Whispers was accepted.  (This must have been before The Key to Midnight and The Funhouse became back-to-back hits, since anyone selling 2 million copies of their novels wouldn’t really be considering a career change.) 

 Koontz, who was simultaneously working with at least 4 different publishers (Putnam/Berkley, Jove, Doubleday, and Pocket Books) was asked by Putnam/Berkley to cut the novel down, but he was unwilling (or unable) to do it, insisting they accept or reject the novel as it was.  Koontz held his ground and won out, and based on the paperback sales of Whispers, he appears to have been right.

 Whispers reads like a typical Koontz novel, which is a criticism, but I have to say I enjoyed the story.  Koontz sometimes recycles stock characters, giving them new names and locations, but I guess when you’ve published over 100 books (and counting), you run the risk of repeating yourself.  Strong, assertive female characters paired up with somewhat passive male characters is a Koontz trademark.  Detectives Michael Madison and Carson O’Conner in Dean Koontz’s Frankenstein could be a reincarnation of Tony Clemenza and Hilary Thomas from Whispers.  Odd Thomas and Stormy Llewellyn also fit the bill.  In Whispers, although Hilary has her share of insecurities and Tony is not exactly a shrinking violet, we see the same pattern.  Hilary is a highly successful Hollywood writer, while Tony is a police detective who would like to hand in his badge to be a full-time artist.

 One major difference in Whispers from other Koontz novels I’ve read (Whispers is the oldest Koontz novel I’ve read, but it’s decidedly better than other “early” Koontz novels Midnight (1989) or The Eyes of Darkness (a 1981 Leigh Nichols novel) which I found disappointing.), Whispers has more sexuality than anything else I’ve read from Koontz.  Many of his novels have sexual content, but in the others I’ve read we always stay at about a PG-13 rating.  Whispers’ sex scenes take the reader into R territory even when it isn’t required for the plot.

 Whispers offers several twists and turns which keep the reader guessing, but my main criticisms of the book are the twists themselves.  Whispers is a difficult novel to review without including major spoilers, so I put the spoilers at the bottom of the review, after the ranking.    

 Here are my generic criticisms:

The reader figures out the twists too far ahead of the characters (one of whom is a police detective), and worse, one of the biggest twists just wasn’t believable.  I think Koontz is a great writer (I’ll even admit to emulating some of his technique), but for me, I put the story above the writing.  The trouble with Whispers is in the story.  Better handling of the twists could have lifted this novel into the upper echelon of Koontz’ work.  I deducted a couple of points for the plot issues, but even though the characters seemed a little familiar, I still enjoyed the ride in this one.

 Rating:  7.5 out of 10

 *********************Warning:  Plot Spoilers*********************

Katherine Frye deciding to raise her twin sons with a single identity is a lynchpin of the plot (along with the incestuous relationship between Katherine and her father, Leo), but Katherine’s solution to having unexpected twins is extremely complicated while I immediately thought of a much simpler solution for her dilemma. 

 While concealing her pregnancy from the outside world, Katherine devises a cover story to allow her to return home with her child after the birth. 

 Her story is she has agreed to help a pregnant friend by taking in her friend’s newborn, so when Katherine unexpectedly delivers twins, she feels she can’t return home with two infants. 

 Why not?  Why not just return home with the twins and tell anyone who asked that her friend wasn’t completely honest with her when she told of her pregnancy because she feared Katherine wouldn’t be willing to help if she knew there were two babies?

 I know Katherine was crazy, but crazy isn’t the same as stupid.  I had a hard time believing Katherine wouldn’t think of the “blame the friend” approach since she was apparently smart enough to conceal her twins’ secret (and force them to do the same) for so many years.

So why didn’t Katherine blame the friend and return with her twins?  Because then Koontz wouldn’t have had maniacal, identical twins to chase Hilary Thomas around.

4 Past Midnight by Stephen King March 25, 2010

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4 Past Midnight is a collection of 4 dark fantasy/horror novellas with each story (in the hardcover I read) checking in at around 200 pages.  This review will briefly discuss each tale, giving a separate rating for each, and then provide the overall rating.

 Unlike some of King’s other collections, this book is a mixed bag, so I’ll present the review of each story in the order that I liked them.

Secret Window, Secret Garden

 This story was made into a movie with Johnny Depp playing Mort Rainey, a writer whose marriage and life are already unraveling when a strange outsider challenges him about a story the man says Mort stole from him. 

 The menacing stranger threatens Mort, insisting he stole the short story “Secret Window, Secret Garden” from him, and when Mort refuses to admit to something he didn’t do, things escalate and people (and animals) start getting hurt.

 I saw the movie before I read this story, so many of the twists and turns were already revealed to me, but in spite of that, I still enjoyed reading this.  For someone who hasn’t seen the movie, I imagine this story would be even better.

 King does a masterful job with the pacing and the characters, creating an enjoyable read throughout.

 Rating: 9.5 out of 10

 The Langoliers

 Another King story that became a movie (actually a 1995 ABC mini-series), the Langoliers is the story of a late-night, cross-country flight where the unthinkable happens.  Passengers awaken mid-flight to find there are only 11 people left on board a flight of nearly 200, and among the missing are the pilot and crew.

 The hook instantly caught my attention.  What happened to the rest of the passengers?  Those who remain find jewelry, watches and even surgical screws left behind by the missing, but what happened to the people?  The end result is a strange and intriguing story, but this one plays better in the imagination of the reader and had to be extremely difficult to translate to the screen.  I haven’t seen the mini-series, but I think I’ll stick with the print version.

 Rating: 8.5 out of 10

 The Library Policeman

 This story held some promise for me when the main character, Sam Peebles visited the library to prepare for a speech and encounters an old woman named Ardelia Lortz who gives him just the books he needs, but then warns him to return them on time or face the library policeman.

 When Sam later recounts his experience, people react strongly to the name Ardelia Lortz, but Sam doesn’t know why.  Later, as the mystery of Ardelia Lortz is revealed, Sam must face the demons of his past, as well as the Library Policeman, in order to survive.

 I was hoping for more of a straight ghost story here, but King goes in a slightly different direction, which was a slight let down.  Overall though, this was a decent horror story.

 Rating:  7 out of 10

 The Sun Dog

 This is one of the few King stories I didn’t like.  At one point, I was thinking to myself, “I don’t care what happens to any of these people.  I’m just ready for this to wrap up.”  That pretty much diffused any tension and made this one of my least favorite King stories (out of about 100 I’ve read).

 Rating:  5 out of 10

 Overall Rating:  7.5 out of 10

Mission Compromised by Oliver North February 25, 2010

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Book Review:  Mission Compromised by Oliver North with Joe Musser

I really had no idea what I was getting into reading a book by Oliver North.  The Oliver North I knew about was the Marine left holding the bag when the Iran-Contra scandal hit in the ‘80’s.  Even at the time it was obvious North was just the fall guy, but who is North the writer, and what exactly would he have to say?

Mission Compromised is the fictitious account of Marine Major Peter Newman, who takes a job with the National Security Agency and ends up occupying Oliver North’s old office.

Not only does Major Newman take over North’s office, but he later contacts North himself for advice when things in his new job start looking a little fishy.  The insertion of the author as a character is a little weird, and I’m not sure what exactly it adds.  North could have used a stand-in character, and we would have gotten the point.

Newman’s top secret job is to head up a United Nations sponsored anti-terror unit whose job is to assassinate terrorist leaders before they become famous.  Set in the 1990’s, Newman’s targets include Saddam Hussein as well as Osama Bin Laden, but Newman signs on in order to exact vengeance for his brother’s death at the hands of Mohammed Aidid, a Somali warlord.

The book is filled with intrigue, with Newman doing his best to stay ahead of the bad guys while trying to figure out exactly who his enemies really are.  The action takes from UN Headquarters to Iraqi palaces and many places in between.  The title tells us what happens to Newman’s mission, so much of the novel is spent with Newman trying to unravel the conspiracy just to survive.

The writing in this novel is not great.  I found a couple of spots where some editing could have cleaned things up, but once the story gets going, the writing doesn’t detract from the story.  The story, aside from all of the military acronyms, is good.  Much of my enjoyment was in trying to figure out how much of the story came from North’s experiences and how much came from his imagination. 

I have a copy of the second book in this series on my bookshelf, and I plan on reading it after I’ve cleared out my backlog of reading.  North does a good job creating a good guy we care about, so I’ll be interested in checking in with Peter Newman again sometime.

Rating:  8 out of 10

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